Wednesday, April 29, 2009

Over & Out!

ABC Wednesday - It's An ~O~! 

Over-the-Top, this
Beauty of Spring. It's pinkness,
Gorgeousness...endless!

Out of Kilter,
Out of alignment! Oh! A
Cupola askew!

When my friend, WT commented, she pointed out,
quite rightly so, that the original second
line (above) was one haiku syllable short.
Problem corrected!
Thanks, WT!

~~~

xoabb
expect anything!


First photo - taken yesterday, Candy Cane Crab Apple in my front yard
Second photo - taken last weekend in DC , around 10th and I street,
no idea what building it is

19 comments:

  1. :) lovely haikus and great illustrations of them with the photography

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  2. OMG I thought you were leaving!

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  3. Isn't the color of the crab apple the prettiest pink?

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  4. Cupola haiku, second line, seems to be missing a syllable.

    How do you like me now?

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  5. I would not have noticed that cupola askew if you hadn't pointed it out! Great shots....espcially struggling to find an "O". The flowers are beautiful!

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  6. Observant one, aren't we? Advice from a friend years ago. She told me to always be sure to look up. Obviously she told you too. :)

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  7. Interesting....would love to know what that building was.

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  8. Oh dear....must rework haiku, not enough syllables. Thanks, winetipper...I think.

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  9. Good "O" Miss Annie! Love the shot of the cupola askew; good eye! Gorgeous blossoms.

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  10. I find anybody making haikus very clever! I have no idea how to create one! I love your photos!

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  11. Nicely done .. I dont 'get' how you do a haiku

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  12. Haikus are wasted on me, but I like the photos. :)

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  13. I feel like that sometimes...a cupola askew.

    Wonderful darling...wonderful.

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  14. Over and out is very creative...nice shots for O...

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  15. Great photos! Askew cupola! ODD. Actually, occidental haiku is not limited to the old 5-7-5 because it was based originally on sounds and our words are totally different.

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